lay down further..
further.. further.. farther
still awake, dear..?
A contest entry
- Three lines. Three words each. by The Pedestrian.
515 points, ended March 23, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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nice
nice write for the prompt . . short, of course. . liked "lay down further . . " and "still awake, dear . . ? " . . good luck in the contest . .
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I like how this is more speaking to someone than a typical poem. The punctuation sort of adds to it, as does the last line being seperate. Nice job and good luck. ^^
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