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Nostalgia (Haiku)

Lone; tranquil waters
Ebbing tides bathe playful toes
Nostalgia claims me

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Prompt: Haiku
My third. These are fun!

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  • dustookie2
    September 17, 2008

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    Hood Winked!!

    A haiku always makes me smile as I allow the words to linger while I ponder in thought. The tranquility of soaking up the natural world around us guiding comforts and balance to still chaotic thoughts. Thank you for the retreat I found within your lines.


  • Manoj Sanyal
    March 23, 2008
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    well penned.
    Best wishes and good luck,