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Love Whispered

  Love whispered
    my name...

  I woke to answer
      the sound...

  But no one
          was there.

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option * Another dark and lonely night ~ Grammy Awards ~ From Bronze to Gold

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  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    April 28, 2008

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    Sounds like you were deeply in love and suddenly lost your lover? Hope all is well and thank you for this lovely entry!

    Regards
    Becks


  • Blooming Poet
    April 1, 2008

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    Beautiful haiku.I love it. It is so relatable, especially for me. i really liked it, I have been there beefore.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 28, 2008

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    Awww this is very sad, I'm sorry nobody was there. I spent lots of time thinking I heard love, but it was only a copycat, not the real thing.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    March 25, 2008
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    Your haiku comment 5-7-5

    Truly perfect flow
    From 'Love' to 'there' beautiful
    I suggest no change

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