Angelic wings upon this ladies back,
sweet magic within her hands
her heart energizes those in her sights.
You can sure rest sweetly by her words,
she is so full of affection, tender loving care.
Nothing is more impressive, then this lady here.
Lovely is this woman, holding baby’s everyday.
She offers her own techniques, in different forms.
Patterns vary, but she’ll nail them every time.
Passing on encouragement, is a gift of hers.
Yes I must say, she is already taken,
and ordinarily I won’t chase someone like her,
but she understands me & fulfills my world.
As I write this out for the world to see,
a love that’s real, now pours heavily from me.
I’m willing to shout it out, the way she makes me feel,
for I absolutely would give up everything, for her.
To just yell, “I love you beautiful” just so that she knows,
that she someone special, and I’m in love with her.
Author notes
Dedicated for someone beautiful, simple enough, does she know sort of, but , she has someone, being the reason...oh yes...I adore her. By the way its written with magic from my pen, I am sure she will figure it out.
A contest entry for:
...:::Secret Love:::...
If you love someone, and the person doesn't know it. It could be because you're affraid to what people are going to say, or because you don't want to be rejected. Write what you feel for this person and why this person doesn't know you love her/him.
A contest entry
- ...:::Secret Love:::... by Lislaine.
525 points, ended April 5, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Deep felt emotions here, what an exquisite piece
~Bret~
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Warmly and beautifully written sweetheart? Now who is THIS one? Love you baby Scott
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...this is beautiful...
XXJeannette
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Ouuu, You love the teach!
Good choice, she knows all the right forms, I mean moves, I mean words.. yea, that's it. LOL.
Thanks for sharing sweet V~ Love yas. -Timothy aka poeticweaver~ f
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This subject I chose for: secret love, I chose it based on a poem I wrote recently... It would be very great if you could read it...Its called feelings
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I know and I love you too Tory.
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taunting passion thiz blew me away because you robbed my heart of what ya boi was feelin
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aww...
This is soo sweet!!! I love it, I'm like: I have no words But its sooo sweet! U have a great tallent! good luck in my contest! hope You had FUN
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How wonderfully beautiful and such a strong dedication to someone so dear to you...something we all need and crave...true blue love...excellent work and tribute...from one beautiful heart to another...
Best!
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oh mummy this is such a beautiful write and you have penned with such strong words and feelings i adore this piece well done and best of luck
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Beautifully written and a fantastic poem.
Love
Sue
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awww this is a beautiful write. heartfelt too thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
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very nice. beautuful.
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Hmmmm... What can I say? For starters 'tis good. Very good. "Yes I must say, she is already taken,
and ordinarily I won’t chase someone like her,
but she understands me & fulfills my world." When I read that it made me remember a time when I had a secret love. Good Job, let the poetry flow. -
wow
i have another account but i have'nt been on either in quite a while infact i only one thing on this account and i often read but yours is one a beautiful things i must say well writen -
Very sweet and affective! Breathless...
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