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Mismatch

Harvest moon .....
    .....  sullen heart


Breathless

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Errant Panther

prompt: mismatch
no of words 5.

A contest entry

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Comments

  • luv2dream gold member
    May 25, 2008
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    of course short and very sweet..i love using my imagination

  • phoenixonfire
    March 30, 2008
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    WOnderfully spoken in 5 words..

    pri


  • jasminerose
    March 29, 2008

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    An amazing and very creative entry!! WOW! Excellent choice of 5 words!!
    I wish you all the best in the contest
    Jazzy


  • poet2angels gold member
    March 29, 2008

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    You are brilliant!

    5 words of amazement, Cuz!!!
    In awe once again
    Lynda