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Game Face

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cold incessant stare

 

against winter's harsh canvas

 

face of survival

 

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A contest entry

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  • grannyeri gold member
    April 6, 2008

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    Enjoyed this quickie haiku. we are getting so good at thinking on the spot for these contest. Nice bronze you won too - congratulations.


  • Perception
    April 5, 2008

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    .... wow.

    You left me speechless... Wonderful... I love the... depth and the word choice in this one.

    Great job


  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    March 31, 2008
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    Wow! This was really deep! I loved it! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~


  • secberm
    March 24, 2008

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    Ut-oh, Shaggy. It's the return of the Haiku Queen. She's been away teaching Tai-Chi and manicuring Bonsai trees but... She's Baaack!

    Well done, love. One.

    Dez


  • Swangrnv gold member
    March 23, 2008
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    Holy!

    Man that's a beautiful and scary sight! the words aren't bad either! congrats on the bronze.


  • Manoj Sanyal
    March 23, 2008
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    good one...
    Best wishes and good luck,


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    March 23, 2008

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    Whoa! Love the background and your words, Fantastic Haiku

    ♥
    Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda

  • Liquid memories
    March 23, 2008
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    a real pack of them no less. I am only one, so they better stay back.success in the contest.

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