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Time to waste

I laugh off a bad joke,
and wash it down whiskey.
I don't trust a word I say,
and I know you don't believe me.

I'm in love for the fourth time tonight;
I wonder will it last?
I've had love that'd last forever,
all those loves are in the past.

Another bad joke,
washed down as before.
It seems every time I am burned,
I feel less like a whore.

Third drink now at the bar;
I'm standing there alone.
I didn't like you anyway;
your history is known.
All the time I had to waste,
for nothing to be gained.
Drinking whiskey from the bar,
but I still have that aftertaste.

I'm in love for the fifth time tonight;
I wonder will it last?
I've never been in love before,
but that time is in the past.

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  • silentsorrows
    February 1
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    you have a good way with words


  • Shakes-spear
    March 23, 2008
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    I can relate

    I have been to a place in my life, like this describes. It was not one of the times I choose to remember. I hope you have found new direction, as the one you are seeming to be on...is in the wrong direction. Good luck, I hope your next penny is a shinny one! The Shaker ( thanks for stopping byu my work also!)