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Upon A New Moon Night

Go out alone
on a new moon night
escaping city glow.
Feel the thrill
of utter darkness
strangely reminiscent
of adolescent fears.

Let your heightened senses
attune to the ever curious presence...

determine benevolence
pray against malevolence.

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  • Virgoan silver member
    March 31, 2008

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    The first stanza just make me still and reflect...that alone can stand as a poem.

    nicely written piece

    Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

    HENSLEY