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chilly autumn wind

chilly autumn wind
rattles acorns in oak tree
squirrels scurry

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 10

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    oh tis is cute

    i can see this in my mind as th squirrels ,scurry to grab and hide, nice one indeed, thank you for this ntry, good luck
    mm


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    October 9, 2008

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    My kind of Haiku I can sit on my back porch and see them running from limb to limb in the oak trees on the hill side.
    Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
    ED.


  • Meroza
    September 13, 2008

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    This leaves such an image! It playes with my inspiration, makes me want to write something!

    Well done and thanks for posting


  • Perception
    April 5, 2008

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    What haikus are all about... right?

    Hehe... This is an amazingly penned poem here... Great job


  • Manoj Sanyal
    March 23, 2008
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    very well penned.
    Best wishes and good luck,


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    March 23, 2008

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    How cute. I wish we had squirrels in Australia Everyone always says how cute they are


    Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • sheltered
    March 22, 2008
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    Excellent. Haiku at it's best.

  • Acidanthra
    March 22, 2008
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    This was very enjoyable to read. Well done!!


  • Kelli Marie
    March 22, 2008

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    A very nicely written haiku. Has it all. I think you did a really good job. Good luck in the contest.
    Kelli


  • ScarletO gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    Then he gets cracked on the head with a nut. Wakes up buried in nuts. OK, a well versed haiku,,,I love squirrels and those bushy tails.

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