Have you ever listened
Closely to the oceans tide?
It will sing you a lullaby,
Even in midday light.
With the smell of serenity surrounding the air
You would hear the song of a love story,
One like no other ever heard before.
About how the ocean is pulled to the moon
Creating each crevassing wave.
Even with the distance of light years
They are never apart forever.
It has been a love that stayed true,
Even through the fading ages.
This I believe is why you can truly fall in love forever.
Finding hope big as the moon,
All while at first sight, it is so breath taking.
As a cold rush of water running between your toes
Sinking you into the warm sand
Holding you tight and never letting you go.
The sensation of security,
It's a feeling you cannot fight.
Falling in love is a truly wonderful song to be sung,
And a beautiful sight to be seen.
A contest entry
- Full moon blushing by Virgoan.
900 points, ended March 31, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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3rd line of the second part, "breathe taking" would be "breath taking" or "breathtaking". the latter is a word.
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Very serene and blissful words...I wish things in life always turn out to be like this. Thee first stanza just pulled me in - wonderful
Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
HENSLEY
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