Hourglass broken
Within amaranthine spring
Bitter chill banished
Within amaranthine spring
Bitter chill banished
A contest entry
- Are you in Haiku mood? ... PIF QUICKIE... 15 poets by Manoj Sanyal.
370 points, ended March 23, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow... This is an amazing haiku. No wonder you got gold...
Wow... Breathtaking, I love your choice of words....
~ Beautiful
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wonderful take on spring my friend - amazing word usage here
congrats on the gold
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Haiku too? Oh my. Well done. I cannot write Haiku for beans, but - YOU can. Well done. ~Pamela
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awww this is such a beautiful poece written about spring and i always love you have written it but it is chilly here its snowing hehe
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very nice best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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well expressed.
Best wishes and good luck,
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Gorgeous
Love the vivid imagery and incredible vocabulary you packed into the Haiku! Well done!
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Chills ripple up and down the spine reading this, awesome Haiku
♥
Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Love Your Haiku!
You write so nicely,
It describes spring like it is.
I love your great poem. -
Nice Haiku Dear Good luck with it
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Banish that chill far far away!!! lol. This is very good. Well written. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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Very nice flow/soundings here. Excellent!
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Very well done!!
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I wish it were banished,,,well written.
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