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Tell Me Anything

Meet my eyes and tell me something
Look at me, and tell me anything
Tell me you love me, tell me you hate me
Tell me I am just a distant memory
Tell me to leave you, to run away
Tell me not to go, tell me to stay
Tell me you're hurting, tell me you're fine
Tell me you're over me, tell me you're mine
Tell me you're happy, you're sad, you're confused
Tell me you're bored, scared, or amused
Meet my eyes and tell me something
Look at me and tell me anything

Turn your head and tell me how you feel
Lift your face and for once be real
Tell me you want to, tell me you can't
Tell me something, don't assume I understand
Tell me a feeling, a word, a thought
Tell me the memories you wish you'd forgot
Tell me you wish we had never met
Tell me it's a moment you'll never forget
Tell me the truth, tell me a lie
I'm begging you, please, for one little reply
Meet my eyes and tell me something
Look at me,

Please,

And tell me anything

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    April 5, 2008

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    The desperation of needing information can be maddening. Thank you for sharing, best of luck in the contest.

    ♥
    whisper

  • goalsv
    March 23, 2008

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    Amazing that this has not won any awards. What a great rhyming poem that shows that communication is the key to keeping a relationship going. Even someone telling us faults is better than silence, there is no secrets. Excellent thought.


  • iamthe4ofspades
    March 23, 2008
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    ei!!! bcuz of ur poem, i just made a song!!!! tnx!


  • invisible2u
    March 23, 2008
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    I really like this poem, I can relate I think you did a good job!!!


  • Stonecreek
    March 22, 2008
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    The "tell me's" get to be too much, but i like the idea of it. I'd like to see this poem rewritten to be far more specific to you. Right now, it gets the point across, but it does so using vague words. Personalize this, make it have flair and a voice of its own, because right now, it sounds like a lot of other poems on the same subject.

    • willowprincess
      March 22, 2008
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      thanks for the comment.
      how do you think i could make it more personal?

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