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Fresh Start

I dont know why
I still hang around.
You've caused me only pain
and yet I can not seem to let go.

Youve broken my heart
tore away my soul
and yet i stay
as i watch you go.

We've been friends
almost lovers
but always ememies
when the day is over.

You've made me angry
more times than i can count
but when you make me cry
I am full of doubt.


But after all these years
and all of my tears
I'm still waiting
for you to notice me here.

And now finally
the roles are revered
and its you asking
for one more chance.

I put aside my pain
and bandage my heart
as i look you in the eye
and pray for a fresh start.





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  • brkn4u
    March 25, 2008

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    aww

    this is good amber really really good. you did a great job expressing your self here but you spelled enemies wrong you spelled it ememies. fix it and ill love you forever =D


  • jbbrandi
    March 22, 2008

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    I like this one. Especially the line "and bandage my heart". I just like lines like those...and I also adore the feelings expressed in this piece...nice job. Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering!