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Mysteries

Thinking about all
Of life's mysteries

 

Wanting to know the answers

To every little question.

 

Looking in the worlds holes

Looking under the ground,

Just looking for the answers to all

Of life's little questions.

 

Never found what I was looking for ,

Never giving up on what I thought

I knew, when no answers ever came to me..

 

I ask you this question then,

Since I guess I will never know..

 

Can we find the answers in one another

Or will we always be looking

for all the answers to life's little

Mysteries..

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  • buffsab99
    May 4, 2008

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    Excellent

    Mysteries
    Thinking about all
    Of life's mysteries



    Wanting to know the answers

    To every little question.



    Looking in the worlds holes

    Looking under the ground,

    Just looking for the answers to all

    Of life's little questions.



    Never found what I was looking for ,

    Never giving up on what I thought

    I knew, when no answers ever came to me..



    I ask you this question then,

    Since I guess I will never know..



    Can we find the answers in one another

    Or will we always be looking

    for all the answers to life's little

    Mysteries..


  • Gibson
    April 5, 2008

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    I'm not sure I'm taking the poem the right way, but you can never really know for sure if the person cares about you until you share the one moment of clarity with each other, and then no doubt can remain.


    • Angelflower
      April 5, 2008
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      This poem you can take however you like.. Though I haven't seen this side of the poem before..lol. But I like the way you see it.. I was going through a "rough emotional" time when I wrote this.. But I'm glad that you liked it..


  • Shenanigans
    April 2, 2008

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    huh. I like this a lot. Simple, but real. You raise a very important question here, thank you for entering. Best of luck!


    • Angelflower
      April 2, 2008
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      I'm glad that you liked it.. And thank you very much.. Best of luck judging.. There are many out there that are really good!
      Jetleena


  • RockSteady
    April 2, 2008
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    got to have this

    my my my look to their eyes their answers we may find


    • Angelflower
      April 2, 2008
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      Lol I'm glad that you liked this piece..lol..Your kind comment made me smile..
      Jetleena


  • individuality gold member
    March 28, 2008

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    for every answer we find in life there is another question that pops along to mystify us - a good poem

  • almostgone
    March 24, 2008

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    Lovely little piece. I've always looked for the mysteries in life by staring endlessly into a lovers eyes. You can never look further than a true love.
    I hope all of your questions can be answered in the form of a gold trophy. A truly well written piece. Best of luck!


    • Angelflower
      March 24, 2008
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      ahh.

      Well isn't that sweet of you.. Looking where a lot of people forget to look when in need of answers.. A lovers eyes.. .. I'm glad that you enjoyed this..
      Peace to you, Jetleena


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    March 23, 2008

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    A most clever little pondering dear and best of luck in the contest.


    Love and peace,
    mj.


    • Angelflower
      March 23, 2008
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      thank you very much.. I really appreciate all of your comments.. They mean a lot.. I'm glad that you like it..
      Peace to you, Jetleena

  • Liquid memories
    March 23, 2008

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    I think using the full mind potential, we will always want to find more and more answers everyplace we travel and in all places. I love the experience of new things, travels, peoples and things and stuff. exciting.


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    March 23, 2008

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    loved this poem!

    such wise questions you ask of us and yourself.
    Perhaps it is in the freedom of choice that we are blessed, in America and from the heavens above.
    How eager they must be peeking from above to see our
    bold lives witness..hope, peace, faith, and most of all
    love for one another.
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen : )) i'm glad I don't have all the answers, each day is a gift to be opened!
    loved your poem!


    • Angelflower
      March 23, 2008
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      Thank you

      I'm so glad that you like this poem.. It took me sometime to write it because I found it hard to put into words.. But I did it and now I see that people seem to like it. Again thank you very much.
      Peace to you, Jetleena

  • XROCKOx
    March 23, 2008

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    haha this got me thinking...and asking a lot of questions concerning my life, and thats a good poem i believe


    • Angelflower
      March 23, 2008
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      Thank you very much.. I'm glad that you liked it.. I hope that it doesn't make you ask to many questions to life..
      Peace to you, Jetleena


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    i think about this

    but I am glad there are mysteries in life. Im glad I dont know everything because if I did there would be no need for God. I am a mess and I have to hope there is someone out there bigger than me that has the answers to what I lack. This is well penned and thought provoking. Love you sweetie, Daddy


    • Angelflower
      March 23, 2008
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      Hmm.

      Yes, to know everything in this world we would need no God. But it seems that we cannot help ourselves to look still..
      I'm so glad that you liked it..
      Peace to you, Your Daughter

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