Irresistible
By: rainbow bi trinity
Crazy jigga
But with heat
The things I really
Like is your smooth
Brown long feet
And the character
Behind the faith
In a force driven women
Right up until the
Moment me having to write this
I am really sittin here
Wishing to give you
A kiss
A hug
Tell you
How your so irresistible
And at times I have no way to control it
I been having a crush on you a little bit
Over a year but I don’t have to tell you
That because I have meet your flesh
And seen you in many different wayz
Your just so irresistible and there is
Not much more else to say.
Author notes
Irresistible
I Know The Feeling
In a list
A contest entry
- Expressing Your Poetic Feelings by D Saul So Sexy.
550 points, ended March 31, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Irresistible
Comments
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I know how that feels lol, finally dating the girl I've been in love with for almost a year, yay me :] lol
I like this a lot
stay sick
xx Sin -
Are you holding back?
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Beautifully Inscribed With Lots Of Love.
Thanks for sharing here your talented soul.
Congrates on the HM.
Take care, peace. 
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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thank u
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good stuff
nice write, and congrats on the honorable win!
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thank you
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GOOOD STUFF I ENJOYED THE READ
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thanks
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passion..
knows no boundaries and love is
oblivious to anything but itself.
This was a alluring piece filled with
all the excitement that romance brings
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thanks
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I love this mommy and i know what thiz feel like even though we feelin thiz for tha same LADY i feel it but she mine
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thanks
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What if I whisper all this in your ear....confessing my erotic desire for you?....lol
Wonderful poem...
Kisses all over, honey!
Galaxy2
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i really liked this.
And at times I have no way to control it
I been having a crush on you a little bit
Over a year but I don’t have to tell you
That because I have meet your flesh
And seen you in many different wayz
Your just so irresistible and there is
Not much more else to say.
nicely penned, best of luck in the contest.
keira
liloven -
I'm feelin this Trin! Great job in expressing yourself in this great write! The title is great also! Best of luck in the contest!
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