At night with waves crashing
on some far distant shore,
and the sky stretching on
to vast lands unexplored,
with stars blurred in water
that they do not swim in,
and white caps ever-lapping
at their tide-pulling friend,
and the merging of the two
that can not really be,
happens each night in the ocean
and so shall for eternity.
Author notes
Prompt was, "The water and the sky as one." (#76)
A contest entry
- The 0 to 100 Contest! by Peachy.
600 points, ended April 4, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I liked the rhyme and last few lines. Cleverly done and excellent word use!
Thank you for entering, you did a great job with the prompt!
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You sure can!
Your prompt is.....
The water and the sky as one. You know when you're on a boat at night in the sea, how all the stars are reflected in the water and it looks as if the sky and sea are linked and never end? Well, hope you understand
Good Luck!
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