Locked inside four walls,
trying as hard as to reach as far,
locked inside this wasted mind,
even though, like this, I'll be fine...
Converted into a silent thought,
for you I was never good enough,
Tied my hands to never let lose,
for all that is left, you left me confused.
And life seems to hit me were I get hurt,
and I try to hold the pain and end up being burnt.
And life seems to have no compassion,
it seems from my pain he gains satisfaction.
I find myself talking to the walls again,
I can't find the reason to keeping this pain,
maybe it's my reminder to never fall in love,
or maybe it is the real reason why I am undone.
Wearing black, wearing red,
loosing mind, trembling thread,
holding back, giving in,
loving you from within...
I find myself talking to the walls again,
reaching over, past this faint,
I will never give enough,
for inside this body, there's no heart.... ♥
Author notes
"Lay me down to sleep,
and pray this boy won't break this 'beat."
XXVampireeyesXX
In a list
A contest entry
- all the prewrites you want by serenity silvermoon.
600 points, ended March 29, 2008, 150 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
&& in the end.... we all die alone...
Comments
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this is a sad poem your not though one that talks to walls but theres a differents my walls talk to me thanks for sharing god bless you forever and always love dianna lee green also knowned as serenity lynn silvermoon
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"Close your eyes and count to ten
Pray you never wake again"
Decent. Not a fan of rhyme(Or more like- Can't do it myself, and thus don't see the value in it>>) But this was pretty nice, not forced, so it works here. Even though it's 'emo' and the idea- when stated without the poem is a little.. overdone, the way you present it makes it not seem so. So I commend you for that.
-Danneh<3(There's always a heart.)
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