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The Salaryman in Tokyo

Can't afford Ginza
Can't party in Shibuya
my hundred square feet
lies next to the Haneda
and the jets sing me to sleep

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  • IorganicInsight
    March 23, 2008
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    aww. [:
    this is sweet, to me, at least.
    best of luck!