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You are my everything ♥

I wake up
and all I want to see is your sleeping face
perfect-asleep or awake-
((i wished for you on every star in the sky))
I crave your touch and your smell
I crave your voice, your sighs, and your smiles
I crave you
((all i want is you))
take my broken wings
learn to fly
and be free because thats all your crave to be
((i love you with everything i am))
i cant explain what you do to me
but its something i've never felt before
and i love it, all because of you
((you are my everything, my whole world))

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I LOVE GABRIELLE KATHRINE ABOUREZK!!!!!!!!!

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  • swim.x
    August 1

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    It is absolutely impossible for me to express how farmiliar these feelings you have are to me.
    Just watch your capitol letters coz it could get you a dq in a contest.
    Seriously well written poem.
    Well done,
    Chin up,
    swim.x

  • great job.. very well done


  • jbbrandi
    March 22

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    This is...incredible. The feelings leap off the page (or rather the computer screen...) But I relate...good job, good luck in the contest, and thanks for entering!