I wake up
and all I want to see is your sleeping face
perfect-asleep or awake-
((i wished for you on every star in the sky))
I crave your touch and your smell
I crave your voice, your sighs, and your smiles
I crave you
((all i want is you))
take my broken wings
learn to fly
and be free because thats all your crave to be
((i love you with everything i am))
i cant explain what you do to me
but its something i've never felt before
and i love it, all because of you
((you are my everything, my whole world))
Author notes
I LOVE GABRIELLE KATHRINE ABOUREZK!!!!!!!!!
A contest entry
- The love of your life... by jbbrandi.
750 points, ended March 24, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Well??
Comments
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It is absolutely impossible for me to express how farmiliar these feelings you have are to me.
Just watch your capitol letters coz it could get you a dq in a contest.
Seriously well written poem.
Well done,
Chin up,
swim.x

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great job.. very well done


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This is...incredible. The feelings leap off the page (or rather the computer screen...) But I relate...good job, good luck in the contest, and thanks for entering!



