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taking it all away

Deeper then the deep blue sea
thats how deep our love should be
but everything crashed down around us
with that one kiss
frownded upon us

all the wrong reasons
all the wrong thoughts
you told me that
your kiss was nothing
that is meant nothing

and now i sit here thinking
i wasted my first kiss
all because of some stupid crush
did he love me
or was it lust
did he want me
or not

he used me
that rainy day
he abused me
and all the trust i gave

what is love
what is a crush
it couldnt possible mean that much
if someone abuses
all of your trust

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  • jbbrandi
    March 22, 2008

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    Interesting...I liked this...Hmm...I'm not quite sure to say, but that's not a bad thing. Good job, good luck in the contest, and thanks for entering!