They say all of God's Children lived well in his love
But you fell through the cracks and lived in the walls
Not because you were wrong
For you were just
But we worked and lived and shrouded your life
Because its not about whats easy but what is right
We learned the hard way
And you worked the light
Author notes
What is easy or what is right
A contest entry
- Poetry Challenge Round 2... Invite Only by elemental angel.
500 points, ended March 27, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a different take on the prompt, I really like it
I like the subtle rhyming and the tone of your words, this is a very well created poem! Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
Polly
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thank you
Aww thanks i was worried no one would liek this one
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Sometimes we put ourselves through so much, anything for a quiet life? A Good take on the prompt.
Bravo
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