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Something...... Beautiful(?)

It was something......
Beautiful(?)

I knew it was worth it.

There was a grim and glorious beauty to my misery;
It was caused by you.

Author notes

I've never taken part in a Quickie before...
I hope you like it; this is all new to me.
My poems tend to be horrendously long..

A contest entry

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  • Kari gold member
    March 31, 2008
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    Aww, I really liked this piece a lot. I felt it was very personal. Thanks for your entry and best of luck


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    March 22, 2008
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    You penned beautiful brevity.
    Be proud.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    March 22, 2008
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    Ouch. There is pain in these words. Best of luck. ~Pamela


    • letters to no one
      March 22, 2008

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      Thank you for your comment and your applause...

      I appreciate them! I am trying to enter as many contests as possible to get more reads.

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