Whirlwind of surprises
Who know what comes next
Displaying my confusion
In the rhythm of this text
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Looking at this door
Time and time again
Hoping for some answers
willing my mind not to regain
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Knocking at the door
The rhythm of my heart
Getting closer now
But I wake with a start
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Waiting for tonight
Maybe I'll find out
This hidden secret
Before I scream and shout
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Irritated now
Who knows what comes next
Displaying my confusion
In the rhythm of my text.
I tried a different approach from all my others, I hope you like it
Comments
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Lovely expression of the mystery and darkness that can visit us in our dreams, well written, keep the ink flowing dear sis, I have sorely missed your poetry.
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I liked the flow of this and the repeating of the tap tap. It seemed metaphorical, how life can be like a choice of doors which we choose to walk through and have certain experiences depending on which path we choose. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.
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