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Bridge To Nowhere

  

  

   

  

One day in early spring,

I stop to welcome the morning;

Calm and steady breathing,

Hands at my side dangling

Times that I am missing

Face upturned and listening.

Thoughts begin wandering

Down the path I start walking

These feet tired and aching

No place to be going

Lost I am existing

 

 

 

There is a bridge spanning

Decrepit and crumbling

Dark oak wood is browning

Iron slats now warping

The other end is missing

Connected to nothing

 

  

 

Broken dreams escaping

Eyesight narrow and dimming

Arthritic and ailing

I have quit aspiring

Nowhere is inviting

Like this bridge, expiring

Aspirations dieing

With an empty heart weighing

And accomplishments fading

Homeward I am heading

Left with naught but waiting.

 

 

 

Author notes

Written for the group, Daily Inspirations.

Image "Broken Bridge and the Dream" by Salvador Dali
www.canvasreplicas.com/DaliGallery3.htm

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  • Patpowers silver member
    May 11, 2008

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    Excellent work here Rev! You penned one of your finest. I even liked the picture in this! THANKS AGAIN!!


  • Sunduiri
    April 1, 2008
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    Wonderful

    I love this poem! please keep writing


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    March 23, 2008
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    Excellent

    http://allpoetry.com/poem/2140524. I liked your write just as it is. This link relates to another poem which I thought you might enjoy.


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    March 23, 2008
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  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    March 23, 2008
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    Superb

    Wow a very fine write which seems to relate to two others, I read this morning. For those who might like to read them, AP links coming up.


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    March 23, 2008
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  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    March 23, 2008
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    Superb

    Wow, a marvelous poem, reminds me of two others: one I wrote and another one by someone else. Links provided in a moment.

  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    March 23, 2008
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    Superb

    Wow, most excellent. This reminds me of two previous poems, I read this morning: The first was "Bridges", an earlier write of mine, and the 2nd one was

  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    March 23, 2008

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    Superb

    Wow, how ironic this is the 2nd wonderful poem I've read in a row, that reminds me of my poem: "Bridges", which I had reviewed before I'ld read this and the previous one.
    Links to both in a moment.


  • Lexie -
    March 23, 2008

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    Fantastic

    you certainly rose to this challenge,
    very very well done, what a deep and thought provocing piece!


  • Firequeen
    March 22, 2008

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    rev, this turned out great
    I like what you did with your challenge.
    Great work very indepth it speaks to the reader.
    Bravo
    keep the ink flowing
    Fire

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