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Belief, Be Not Brief

I'm besides myself in wonder,
as I wander dreams perceived
True love has been elusive,
and not conducive to my needs

I'm now questioning the feelings,
I whole-heartedly declared
But through your loving sharing,
those sorrows are ensnared

So in my heart of hearts,
my dreams are still conceived
'Cause as long as there is Hope,
there is a reason to believe



 

 

 

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Inspired by Night Hope's "Questioning Disbelief"
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4047449

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  • enitsirhC
    June 22, 2008

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    Wow!
    Absolutely beautiful!
    One of my favorites, for sure!

    Thank you so much for entering my contest with such a beautiful piece!

    Good luck!



  • amaranthine lover gold member
    May 1, 2008
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    lovely piece thanks for entering

  • Musafir
    April 8, 2008

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    well penned.
    I agree...'Cause as long as there is Hope,
    there is a reason to believe.
    Best wishes and good luck


  • second-born
    April 1, 2008

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    this is truly an inspiring poem...there is a positive vibe in it that just makes every reader's heart to hang on and to fight for their beliefs...thank you for sharing this lovely write!


  • DeSiBoO14
    March 27, 2008
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    gReAt PoEm!!!


  • penman gold member
    March 25, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. A great creation for the prompt. Best of luck in the contest


  • ShelleyA gold member
    March 23, 2008

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    A beautiful write and presentation. Hopeful and heartfelt. Good flow and tone. Nice rhyme. Good rhythm. Deep expression of emotion. Good word choice, assonance and nice alliteration. I can relate to your feelings. Well penned and much enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest.


  • Nicolette gold member
    March 23, 2008

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    "'cause as long as there is Hope,
    there is a reason to believe"

    Yes, indeed!!! Iliked the positive feel to this poem, my friend. Someone also said that if you can dream it, you can do it!

    and love is always the best reason! Lovely poetry, Nicky.



    ~ Nicolette


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    March 22, 2008

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    Yes I do agree that the hope is the only truth which can change the tears into the happiness and bring back the beauty of this life..your poem is beautiful and yes its page and its image too itself are the strength of this amazing write..just wonderful ..well done...

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