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My Comforter !

This old thing on my bed

has been around many years.

Every time I say you're gone,

I put it back, where it belongs.

 

TV remote lying nearby

Switching channels constantly.

 

I can't throw it away you see,

for I love it like it loves me.

So in my heart,through joy and tears,

I'll keep my hubby for another forty years!

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Even though this was written in jest, we have probably both thought the same thing many times!

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  • catz Moderators member
    March 24, 2008

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    I see you've modified the poem to contain the required 10 lines, thank you I like the correlation between hubby and the quilt Thats a very interesting quilt, too, very pretty. Did you make it?

    Dee


  • ramblin
    March 23, 2008

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    Lol... yep, after we've put up with them this long why discard them so someone else can reap the benefits of our labors

    A cute poem and with such a sweet message

    ramblin


  • catz Moderators member
    March 23, 2008
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    Lol... a very cute poem, but the contest specifies 10 lines, so if you want to add a couple of lines??....


    • SpiritMother
      March 23, 2008
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      Will do,

      It said ten when I was writing but I guess it counted the spaces as well.. Thanks for the comment.

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