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My Brother

When I was young
I stayed hidden in a corner
For my brother was crazy
Yelling by day
Slamming doors by night

Peace was but a wish

Why?

Divorce

It tore him apart

And scared me to death

 

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    oh this is such a powerful write with such a sadness in it that i can relate to. i hopeyour alright sweetie


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 22, 2008

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    I know how you mean sweetie... divorce and the things like that are very sad indeed to anyone and some people just can't handle it and it tears them up inside. Nicely done here sweetie .