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a photo senryu...... enjoy......... my wife is so serious when looking at a menu................. and a day or two later, she orders!!!!!!!
Written December 5th, 2003
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Eating something you really want takes concentration
Kudos to her for studying she is like me I take my time too
You have a beautiful wife BTW
Loved this one
Do pop over and see me
Love ya
Yer pal
Susan~~~~~~
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awesome write -- i know the feeling it takes awhile for me to order at even my favorite restaurant. great job.
God bless
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hehe.... my cousin is like that when we go out to eat.... it takes her forever to decide what to order. thought that is a very nice picture of your wife and a really funny photoku. great job.
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lol
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Important things take time! She wants to make the best choice!
I did enjoy the pic' and your senryu! Thanks for the laugh! 
<3 Maureen
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Excellent
Love it. Just wonderin'....does she know you posted this. If not, your next piece might be "high noon-ku". Thanks for the smiles.
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Well...you know...takes time...to...actually...make up...your mind...as to what...you want...to eat. I know I take forever! Lol...brilliant ku! I'm still working on mine! Got a good senryu, I think...Darianna x
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HEHEHEHEHEHEHEH well Don, you should know by now, it's a woman's perogative to sit and ponder for a LONGGGGGGG time..HEHHEHEHEHEH lovely little Ku/senryu.. hehehheheheh thanks for the giggle.. as always..
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Your wife isn't the only one. My sister is the same way, it makes me wonder if She'll ever order or if we'll ever get out of a resturant, lol, but this is great as always, Your wife is very pretty, She's very lucky to have you, for you are one of the nicest poets I have met on this site, and I really do mean that Don Anyways, I'll quit rambling on, Awesome as always. Thanks for putting this smile on face & for all the comments you leave on my poems, they make my day brighter ALWAYS. God Bless,
---Sara
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Picture Perfect
You two make one of thee most beautiful couple I've ever seen, I dunno, I just see it that way, and I love the intense moment you captured here so dear, you are such a wonderful man, and I'm sure your wife just adores you, thanks for sharing this moment with us all, I got a chuckle out of this one, but don't you dare tell here I chuckled, heehee! ~Smiles~ You take care my friend, and have yourself a wonderful day!
Much Admiration!
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Thanks Jhirrad for the stopping by........... I always tell her... the menu is the same... it's just the restaurant that has changed!!!! lol..........
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Dude, that is really, really cool. The picture is fantastic (what a hotty for a wife
) and then I like the poem as well. It just sort of imposing. Like, you can just there in a restaurant, developing ideas of what it is that is on that menu...Great work.
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a day or two, oh dear.
must be why she is so lovely ye know. i look at one and in about twent seconds, i 'ave no only ordered everything on the menu but gone to the kitchen to eat it as well... tee hee.
well monk man, ye did well here,and are a vara lucky man.
arden
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