I want to write something that I can be proud of
Something with a flare
I want it to change the world
Then maybe you would care
But here I am
Writing the same poem again
Searching for something to fill the hole
I’m searching for a friend
You can’t imagine the emptiness I feel
I’m so sick of being alone
I would have ended it long ago
If only I would have known
I look at myself in the mirror
I hate what I’ve become
This person staring back at me
Emotionless and numb
A contest entry
- Impress Me. (No Happy. No GOD.) by CatyBrie..
334 points, ended April 14, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - THE BEST OF YOUR BEST by Whispering Wind.
900 points, ended April 16, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Absolutely Anything (No Adult Themes) by DawnKestrel.
550 points, ended June 3, 2008, 77 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I can really feel what you felt like when writing this poem...
Good luck in my contest!
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to try and writes one life from a mirrors point of view will come up wrong each and every-time...Excellent write my friend and thank you kindly for entering
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I have that same person staring back at me so often. This is a great write. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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