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in my bed with me....








in my bed
a puppy and a child
licking noses












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  • fathom me
    June 6

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    haha this was fun!! you're the best at this... thank you


  • Thoughts-of-Soloman gold member
    May 29

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    Impacts a large smile on the face, with so few words. Excellent!

    An aside; your design looks great on a page with a black ground, the planet just hovers there in space, jumping out from the others.

    Sol


    • MariGoes gold member
      May 29
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      Thanks Sol (I like that word Sol [sun])
      That is the moon during an eclipse. The moon is my favourite celestial body, probably my favourite in earth too

      And again thanks for liking my haiku.
      Mari

  • xoPJ
    April 9

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    ha -- cute, but says so much. (my little kittycat at vet all night. will have to get her tale amputated as result of a car accident...hard)
    Needed a laugh!


    • MariGoes gold member
      April 9
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      Thanks and I'm sorry...
      I don't have any puppy, I have a rabbit. Used to have two, but one died a year and half ago. She liked to lick noses

  • Namita silver member
    April 6

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    Awww! This is so cute! Such a pretty haiku... A beautiful capture using words

    - namita


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 5

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    Great imagery in this very very short piece of writing. Loved it.

    Well done.
    Wayne Leon


  • maa gold member
    March 30

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    hahaha, just right now, while reading your delightful haiku, my cat joya came to me and told me to send you a big "miaouuuuuuu", she seems to like you !

    by the way, you look gorgeous on your new author pic ... you're going to melt some hearts with this one


    marion


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    March 29

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    too cute~

    I could envison this one sis
    Love it
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~

  • Just4u
    March 24

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    lol...how very cute...most definitely bring a smile
    to the face...

    Hugs...Eddy


  • wattle silver member
    March 24

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    You are the master (mistress) at placing beauty in words with efficiency. --- Ha - Romance doesn't always live up to it's image. The reality of this scene might just as easily painted a nightmare (with some other child and dog mind).


  • Nicolette gold member
    March 23

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    Oh i can so relate to this - children and puppies in the same bed. This is sooo sweet and what a lovely moment you've penned here, Mari!! A priceless one...

    ~ Nicolette


  • ardentMarch gold member
    March 23

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    such a cute poem - I have sort of committed myself to write for a haiku contest and I only have written one...LOL...could I please send some rough ones to you to have a look for me??


  • Mallig gold member
    March 22

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    This is such a sweet, perfect image! I thought it was going in a different direction when I first saw the title... Loved it!

  • individuality gold member
    March 22

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    ah it is nice to have friends in the animal kingdom - nose kisses and yawns as the dawn captures the scenery


  • Yemassee silver member
    March 22

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    I have to put aside my initial objection to germs...

    It's a Hallmark moment, a smiling, beautiful woman, a happy, rosy faced child and a hyper, but well-mannered puppy.

    Norman Rockwell eat your heart out. You don't know Norman probably, go visit wikipedia.

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