easter bunnies in a row
one named itchymite, four named flo
three named harry, two named joe
one named turtle, cause he’s "slow"
bunny rabbits everywhere
cottontails and belgian hare
giant angora, pinkeyed claire
poofs of fur on derriere
painting eggs all through the night
all sleepy buns but full of sprite
turtle nods and loses sight
paints four flo’s and itchymite
the flo’s in turn paint turtles ear
joe joins in, paints harry's rear
the other harry’s start drinking beer
clicking mugs in easter cheer
if you’re confused, well so am I
I wrote this poem upon a fly
now the easter buns are so darn high
that I doubt the eggs will ever dry!
In a list
A contest entry
- GROUP CONTEST - Partners In Crime - by [Yem] by Partners In Crime.
505 points, ended March 31, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I want to know what Joe painted on Harry's rear. Something Easterish I hope! This is a great poem, rhyme that actually works PLUS humor. Excellent job. This is my favorite in the contest so far
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I like humor...no, I love humor...it makes me dance in a circle....ok, maybe not.
Anyway, humor and bunnies, and turtles...a winning combination...toss in some cows and a moose and you've have the entire Yemish Ark!
I like the fiasco, chaos make great humor.
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Ummm... okay. Flo, Harry and Joe might make it on the fly but I think itchymite and turtle might have a problem keeping up trying to keep ahead of those little feet and hands stomping and grabbing
A cute story, Cindy, very funny
Dee
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Sounds like a fun easter to me You be quite the story teller Good luck in the contest
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really cute poem..good luck in the contest..
xxx
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LMAO!! Very cute! Quite the story teller you are. This reminded me of debilynn starting a paint ball fight Well done. The background is adorable..I love the bunny peeking through and between the easter eggs. Good luck in the contest.
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Wonderful
This contes has certainly brought out some cute poetry...Easter will never be the same...Good luck...I love this...
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Very Cute hehe Good luck with this
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What a delightful and somewhat non-sensical Easter poem. Love the interaction of characters of this poem, playful and fun.
The last word in the second stanza derriair could possibly be spelled derriere.
Well Done!
May you have a blessed Easter
Spring is in the Air
Gray Elk
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lol..This was great. Such a creative and clever write. Quite humorous I must say. Very enjoyable and entertaining. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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Fantastic this is the best humorous easter write i have come across this year had me chuckling like mad. You done a totally brilliant job with this and hmm can understand why so confuessed all the best to you (Brian)
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