She was eight years old
when she discovered
her clit.
The peach hills of her
pale landscape
opening
to herself.
The cool white
snows
peaking atop
the mountains
of those fragile fingertips.
Hands tight fists
and pressure...
she enjoys
going to bed now.
Author notes
comment.critque.
peace to all ~flight
A contest entry
- masturbation by Melissa Gayle.
400 points, ended March 24, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
honesty
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speechless.
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I love how you made this almost elegant in regards to the inspiration!
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Thanks! Why can't masterbation be elegant!!
peace to all ~flight
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omg johanna! i really dont know what to say about this except....HAHAHAHAA. I really dont know weather or not i should be laughing at that or not, but whatever.
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Great poem and perfect take on the prompt. Always good to start at the beginning.
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Ahha, I guess so.
peace to all ~flight
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do you mean 'discovered?'
anyway..
wow..
i have to agree; best poem about masterbation!
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Aww yes I did!! Thanks for catching that!
I'm glad you enjoyed
peace to all ~flight
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best poem about masturbation I've ever read.
seriously. i love this.
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Well thanks!! I'm honored
hehe
peace to all ~flight
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