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Everyone Needs Love~

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Myths meander through, meadows morning dew
Sensual sunrays hearten rainbow's hue
Butterfly lashes, grace emerald eyes
Rosebud's flourish with tantalizing sighs

 

Cotton-candy kisses, lush lips impart

Pillow memories mend her crackled heart

Ancient heavenly hymns guide when souls roam

Faithful refrains lure your song as their own

 

Silken fingertips tap piano keys

Winds whistle upon clouds soft symphonies

Twisting tongues sip to taste a lover's lips

Midnight's glance, sun's bizarre moon-dance eclipse

 

Seek a lover's hand, then you'll understand

When a weaver sews, it starts with one strand.

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I rhymed, so take it! LOL.

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  • cindy4
    September 10, 2008
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    everyone needs love

    Great write


  • going nowhere
    April 12, 2008

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    'Seek a lover's hand, then you'll understand
    When a weaver sews, it starts with one strand.'

    i am floored by your words...

  • karmacae
    April 1, 2008
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    This is just to beautiful for words, I adore your rhyme in this piece....thanks for the read


  • Swan song gold member
    March 31, 2008
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    How true and what a poem! You do this form justice


  • Three Doves
    March 31, 2008

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    Woven perfection ending with a beginning. Excellent write best wishes in life and the contest. Peace in light and love.
    Noah


  • penman gold member
    March 29, 2008
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    Excellent

    Such a touching and loving poem. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Yazhi
    March 28, 2008

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    Beautiful poetry of sweet love!!
    The flow perfect and the rhyming is awesome!
    I love rhyme
    I really enjoyed the cotton candy kisses.. so sweet
    Good luck in the contest
    Yazhi


  • NeonRose
    March 25, 2008
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    Beautifully written. I love the imagery, and the end line is wonderful. Good luck in the contest.


  • EeyoreUK
    March 25, 2008

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    there is such a special something in all of your writes, perhaps I'm just a gluten for love poetry. I do think the last line is absolutely fantastic. Havent seen you around lately and I wonder, have you not been here or just hiding in the shadows?


  • Wandika gold member
    March 25, 2008
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    Nice Tim

    Good rhyme timothy.

    Jim


  • BeautifulFlame
    March 24, 2008

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    Well yes you Rhymed so beautifully! So take that!
    I actually liked its flow and sweetness.

    ~Lisa~


  • mslittlelala
    March 24, 2008

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    I love the tantalizing sighs and cotton candy kisses it was sweet


  • Age of Rain
    March 24, 2008

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    So cliche and yet I love it. *Laughs* Your imagery is glorious and your sentiment one we all can appreciate. Gorgeous write dear poet.

    ~Marty~


  • PerfectImperfection
    March 24, 2008

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    Oh honey! WOW! This is such a gorgeous piece of penning! The rhyme is perfect - and adds a certain brilliance to the emotion. A sonnet - I presume? And for that, I know just how much thought was woven into this. Wonderful write!!!

  • imahealer
    March 24, 2008

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    Even when you write in cliches AND rhyme, your poems flow smoothly and are full of rich sentiment. You sure have all the cliches down pat! LOL Still, the meaning of your words would touch anyone's heart. For a yuck poem, this is pretty darn yummy!

    Shana and gives you a cotton-candy kiss!


  • mysticstorm gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    Yet another beautifully written romantic poem from your pen...the word choices and flow are amazing and the rhyme is well done...very refreshing and deeply felt...
    thank you for sharing your lovely heart with us once more....
    Love,
    mystic
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  • Ryno
    March 24, 2008

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    I really liked the last line - that was really creative and refreshingly original on the content. There is a beautiful, soothing flow here and the piece can really sooth any reader and make them feel loved themselves. This is very beautiful. Good luck in the contest.


  • Katie Lazette
    March 23, 2008

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    Wonderful Write

    With such a variety of lovely words used, this is a masterpiece of rhyme. Good luck in the contest.


  • lady8
    March 22, 2008

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    I liked this alot.Not only do you paint a romantic picture with words but you also made an amazing choice of words and rymed to! wow


  • poeticpieces
    March 22, 2008

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    Sweet,

    Another great one from the weaver's pen!
    This is one of those that says. -awe- throughout!
    I like the rhymes here and the flow is superb!
    Probably to you this is yuck, but even yuck ones rock!
    For I don't think you could mess one up. Great Write.

    poeticpieces


  • Candy6
    March 22, 2008

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    beautiful

    Great write. Great title. Yupe. Everyone needs to be loved. We need to love to spread the kindness to people.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    Dude it is so not yuck.
    Nice sentiments, brother.
    You should try rhyming ever other line until the couplet.

    Be Well
    Mark


    • poeticweaver gold member
      March 22, 2008
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      Thanks,

      I would have,
      but I wanted this to be different.
      I have penned a-lot of sonnets.
      So, I know what ya mean.
      Just switching it up brother.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    awwww this is such a beautiful write hehe and the emotions that soeak throughout are amazing well done uncle i love you


  • Semper-Fi Juggalette
    March 22, 2008
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    great flow love the
    emotion its so true
    i really enjoy it


  • Kelli Marie
    March 22, 2008

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    What a beautifully written love song...poem. Very nicely done. Love the romantic imagery throughout. Good luck in the contest.
    Kelli


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    well I will play one strand and turn it into a musical piece of romantic interlude... Love you honey. This was absolutely a winner.

    (well in my book anyway)

    Love
    Passions

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