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cry out

i cry out when i know i never
hot to say good-bye.
and i think it would have Benn different it i said good-bye
i sit here and wonder why i spent my time being mad at you and not loven you i ask my self why and start to cry-out once again

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  • darkstinger
    June 23, 2008

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    I understand were you're coming from. JUst remember that those you care about, never let your last words be mean ones.

    Ray


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    March 22, 2008

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    sometimes it is best to feel the pain and let the tears flow then move on rather than putting yourself through it over and over again good write best wishes (Brian)