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The Flowers of Spring

Spring buds do open
flowers pink yellow and blue
these bouquets of spring

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  • Swan song gold member
    April 2, 2008
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    Very true Spring time has many boquets!
    Well done


  • intanglio2ring
    March 22, 2008
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    Wonderful Spring Haiku

    Smelling sweet & full of color
    Good Luck in the contest Son
    Tang


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    March 22, 2008

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    You've captured those spring flowers quite beautifully in this haiku. And as I sit here and watch them start to bloom, your words sing a fresh breath of air.

    Good luck in the contest.
    Storm


  • Kelli Marie
    March 22, 2008

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    "bouquets of spring" beautiful visual there. I think you wrote a lovely haiku. Good luck in the contest.
    Kelli


  • Keystone Theater
    March 22, 2008

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    I love springtime, it's that whole feeling that life is starting over, it gives me hope that maybe I too can begin again. Lovely words.


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    March 22, 2008

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    The beauty of spring is certainly a sight to behold and this poem is filled with such a portray of this well done (Brian)

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