as God as are leader,
we must walk in faith,
not in the shadow of death.
the shadow of death follow,
as we walk in the mist of the darkness over head.
we must obey,
or the wreath of God will be taken apone us,
as the lightning strikes us down,
in the pits of hell.
pits of stone,
and pits of lava,
kills us all,
for we have disobeyed,
what are leader has ordered.
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A contest entry
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300 points, ended April 10, 2008, 56 entries
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Honorable mention
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Comments
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this was anouther good poem you have used that pen well again thanks for sharing baby girl
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Umm...just a quick mention, you might want to proofread this one a bit more.
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This has a very chilling feel to it.The imagery is also wonderful.Great write!
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Very good, a scary piece if ended this way. Does show the wrath of God.
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this is good though a bit scary to think about. thankyou so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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