She wants
To kiss him goodbye
And let him go
Can't quite
Get her head around
Him loving someone else
Not yet
Nor can she begin
To understand how
It fell apart
Because to her
It never really did
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The simplicity/clarity works really well here. Each line ends exactly wheere it should.
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hey
hey, i like this. i dont want to sound arrogant and think that its about me, but it could be. i dont know. we should talk?
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I think this is beautifully written, great job!!
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Love can be cruel and the heart can seem to change sometimes so quickly I personaly have had someone change there heart in a manner of hours it seemed after 7 years of marriage just walked away with no reason known so yes can relate to this poem well. best wishes (Brian)
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