It has been one week
You didn't call me or miss me
I think you are mad at me
Because a little complication among us
And you will never understand it
It has been two weeks
You still didn't call or miss me
Now, I really know that you are mad at me
Because a little trouble that we haven't solve
And you will never realize it
Keep wandering near my cellphone
Waiting for your call
Keep looking at my window
Hoping that you will be here with me
Keep staring at our photograph
Wishing that I can turn back the time
This feeling haunting me
These ache are killing me
Your poison has envenom me
I repressed by you
But you still can't understand
I wanna say...
But I don't wanna say
But, this feel made me dying
But, this words force me
But, I wanna keep it for myself
The fact that
I really love and miss you so bad
A contest entry
- The love of your life... by jbbrandi.
750 points, ended March 24, 2008, 24 entries
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This feeling really blow out my brain...I wanna say, I don't wanna say...CONFUSING...!!!
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I liked this! I thought that maybe the "..." wasn't needed, but otherwise your point got across & the poem was written very well.
I know how this feels. I've felt like this a million times, and you penned it good. Thanks for entering & good luckkk! ♥
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this is a nice poem with good meaning and a fine closing statement
thank you for your entry
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thanks guys..
i love you all..^^
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A very brilliant write here.
We all have felt this way atleast once, I know I have, but only once...
~Annie(dragged into the)Shadows
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awww... thats so sad. i love the flow of it great write xxx
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i enjoyed reading this =)
this was really good!
i really like ur writing. =)
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oops...
yeah..thanks for the advice and ur commnt...^^ -
Very nice. Powerful and I like the first two stanzas particularly. But the ending was nice too.
Just a tad of advice...spell check your work and read over it a few times to make sure the words and punctuation makes sense.
I still like! Good job, good luck in the contest, and thanks for entering!
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