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Nothing Is Set In Stone



You question I no longer weep
my eyes no longer look your way,
pure token gestures from my heart
strewn a path you once held sway.

The tears that welled and over-spilt
leaving riveulets lash to chin,
have ceased to flow in aqueise
all consuming yet felt like sin.

In their place you will notice shine
reflections of an inner peace,
genuine soul from deep within
exhaled sigh that will never cease.

Winds of change often come and go
cause ripples in the tide of life,
a minuet with string of pearls
in the place of a cutting knife.

This purple cloak this fragrant flower
a hallmark I choose for my own,
asking nothing back as payment
proving nothing is set in stone.


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  • RuthKephart
    April 4, 2008
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    Just back for another look


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    March 28, 2008

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    Well done. Such a sad yet hopeful poem. Wonderful rhyme in this. Best of luck in the contest. ~Pamela

  • RuthKephart
    March 22, 2008

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    I love the strength behind this piece as well as your prhasing and word usage...aqueise is such a great word
    Great use of rhyme here and an uplifting poem. best wishes in the contest and thank you for your entry
    Ruth


  • Gwenevere
    March 22, 2008

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    It seems by this poem that you have finished grieving and have found the strength to move on.As you say sometimes we just have to accept that nothing is set in stone.good luck to you,