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Wayward Sun

with 52 flavors
      she colors
            natures cape

the sky is
blue

absent
her yellow touch




Author notes

Yellow Crayon

A contest entry

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    Very well deserving of the Silver...so creative and full of wonderful imagery...you brought your feelings alive in so few words...brillantly done...
    Love,
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  • Frozentearz
    March 23, 2008

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    ooooh ya. Congratulations on your award.
    a wonderful painting with your yellow crayon
    Happy Easter to you and yours.
    Love and Light
    Frozentearz


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 22, 2008
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    How beautifully grasping and immensely creative... x


  • Kelli Marie
    March 22, 2008

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    Wonderful...I like the way you let the reader know that the day is absent of sunshine. Excellent imagery. Love your gentle, romantic touch. Good luck in the contest.
    Kelli


  • tara wilson gold member
    March 22, 2008
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    lovely..sooo lovely..

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