The peacock spreads its ~ fan ~
in harmony
melodies
memories
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Author notes
Word Prompt :"Feathering Whispers" - 20 Words
Picture Credit : Peacock by *Queen-Uriel
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest- 20 Words Only! by Acidanthra.
525 points, ended March 22, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Immortal execution for the brain
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loved the lines "soft toned melodies linger"
peacocks are freaky things though ... lol - they look all soft and loving but try to pet a wild one - sheesh!
congrats on the silver
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Great use of the colour changes again. Also, you used my word Kalleidoscopic (can't spell today, goddammit). Yeah that word, I love that word.
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Ah, this one is very well done. I can see why you won the silver here, well deserved Kari. This one is superb
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WONDERFUL! I love the picture, it's truly breath taking. What you have written here is so few words but so much emotion.
pixie -
Most sensitively done, an elegant use of words so difficult to achieve in so few lines and words. A deserved trophy.
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its was a very beautiful poem!!! keep up the good work n i esp like how its written
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christina
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very good.
beautiful write. -
yay!
it's beautiful -
Ah
Thanks for sharing. It's good.
Congrats!
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Wow, very impressive! I loved the difference in font and style to give certain words more emphasis, bringing extra emotion. Great job, poet!!
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I really liked it, it corresponded beautifully with the picture
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wow this an amazing take on the picture and it has such a mixed sense of feelings within this. its stunning and wonderfully crafted wel done sis
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Wow! This is a fantastic use of prompt! Very nice, I like the picture you have chosen for this write, Good luck sis!
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