Verity muttered
holds no meaning,
nothing but lies
bawled in silence.
Love
spoken gently,
lost,
like secrets on the wind.
In a list
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest- 20 Words Only! by Acidanthra.
525 points, ended March 22, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautifully done here sweetie, just so delicate and true, very beautiful... I love the way you ended this, it's wonderful honey.
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Thank you. I don't often write like that, but it worked well.
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I like!! Very creative and word usage was grandly impressive! Great work, poet!
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Thank you muchly. Was a good prompt to work with. Enjoyable and fun and gave a lot of scope.
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awwww this was very deep and emotional..the ending was teary. Well done and the best of luck in the contest
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Thank you very much. I've started taking a liking to working with short pieces again and trying to give it as much scope in few words.
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