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Feather Quill Whispers

Quiet voices
flying birds
lightly tethered
softly weathered,

barely spoken
gliding unbroken
air worn
forlorn,


soft wing words
of
brevity.


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Prompt: "Feathering Whispers"
20 words

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  • Acidanthra
    March 22, 2008
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    Very impressive! I absolutely loved this write. thank you for sharing!


  • Kari gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    Wow you did a piece filled with lots of imagery in it and I like it. Very well done and best of luck in the contest


  • dustookie2
    March 22, 2008

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    You have a great prompt to work withI like the softness of your title the whispers of a feather when you think about the solitude of a feather and the sounds it can create. Having me a zen momentlike the velvet touch of a rose petal. This is a beautiful piece to get lost within the lines. Brilliant take on the prompt.Good luck in the contest. Thank you.