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which crayon



Such an indecisive face
                    of one so young
the unbelievable choice
                    of picking yellow.

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  • phoenixonfire
    March 23, 2008
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    AMAZING!! Well deserved gold..this is such a mesmerizing write!!

    Thanks for sharing...

    pri


  • Bams
    March 22, 2008

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    I want to sit and scrawl around this

    wow, the neatness of getting what we're drawn to to draw with

    this mirrors satisfaction in shifts so well with the indentations for inserts of emotion to settle in before saying the rest. Such as not having to be reconstituted to eye catching attractiveness only but heart calming ones maybe yet. The hand afraid though if unadjusted whether direction of reaction can be followed through. wonderful indications.

    congratulations on impressing all of us I'm sure,
    babies are my subject


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 22, 2008
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    This speaks volumes in brevity. Loved it!.. x