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The Hunt

Silently, prowling,
Stealthy,
The Predator.
Nervously, twitching,
Scenting,
The Prey.
Whispers on the wind
Beware!
Beware!
Peace, shattered
Feathers, floating.

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  • Acidanthra
    March 22, 2008

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    Wow, intense take on the prompt! The thrilling emotion was written very well!


  • Kari gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    You took a very different take on it and also I like the way you layed things out. Well done and good luck


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    March 22, 2008

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    Excellent

    An excellent write that portrays the hunt and the pandemonium caused when the predator begins the attack great write well done (Brian)