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I Love You

Just three happy words
You softly said to me.
Ears sent the message
receiver was brain,
caused vibration at heart.

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Prompt : Feathering Wishper'

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  • High Flyer
    March 22, 2008

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    I like the science of this write entwined with the emotion. Very intriguing.

  • Kari gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    awwwww I love what this says to you very precious indeed you did great and I wish u the best of luck


  • dustookie2
    March 22, 2008

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    Those words from the right person would send shivers and vibrations to the heart..whispers of love. Great take on the prompt/ Good luck in the contest,


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    March 22, 2008

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    How beautiful you describe this feeling when one is told I Love You. well done you captured this really well all the best (Brian)