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I was born melancholy

Her innocence was damaged
the moment the
placenta ruptured.

Aching devotion manifesting
from darkness into light.

She emerged and
breathed in your
deception,
only to be cut down to
the subconscious.

Exposed and suffering
from despondent musings,

 


she withered away.




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  • Scrunter
    March 26, 2008
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    Thisis really dark but I really loved it.
    Good luck and thank you for entering.