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I Thank You

I THANK YOU
for letting me in
and for the chance to be a friend to you
Even though you don't say it
I know you respect me
and value me
Your silence says more than you know
and I appreciate all that you give
It took me awhile
to realise
and accept
the way you are
but I know now
that you do care
in your own way
and that is what I hold on to
and what I cherish
You know that I am here
and that I am a true friend
I know it is hard for you to let go
and open up
but that is OK
you don't have to say anything
just let me be the friend i want to be
I ask nothing more of you
Just let me care about you

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Written December 5th, 2003

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  • Sparkette
    June 29, 2004
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    Aww this is beautiful... *happy tears* well written i have no complaints or suggestions just keep up with the beautiful poetry

  • Palisandre
    December 7, 2003
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    OHH I like...Go YOU. It's sweet....

    Love Amber