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Color Me A Smile

Hello lonely crayon,
Sitting unused in the box.
Will you color me a beautiful smile.

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Prompt ~ Yellow crayon




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  • Angelflower
    April 11, 2008

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    Aww. this was cute yet sad in a way.. It's lonely and you don't smile....lol.. I liked it.. Great write..
    Jetleena


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 22, 2008
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    How divinely pretty... x


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    Wow, this is such a great write. I love your take on this prompt, and you have written this so well with such a lovely ending. Well done.