She's gone, my little one
Room's empty, all that's left
On wall, yellow crayon sun
In a list
A contest entry
- A little prompt... by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended March 22, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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good participation
congratulations on making emotions shine through
this actually made me think of my sister enjoying having a spare room made into guest quarters for nieces a while back with first very close ones. I could imagine them making a memorable mark upon departure, and if in more than laughter of living together still then maybe a momento would be momentary as touch up or clean up framework but now it's just life size right almost...
quite heartbreaking according to ache of separation,
babies are my subject -
How deeply sad and moving... x
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